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Me too. My story "MSG NJT: The Dreams of Angels", while I look at it as an awkward collection, was an attempt at making a story of genuine love. "The Price of Love", my current version, follows what I think is a more natural progression.

Unfortunately, "TDoA" was seen as creepy and abusive by one of my readers. Too much needed changing so I ended up just starting from the prologue: "SOS MGY" and "A Hero, Lost".